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Do you think that the place where a person was brought up has an influence on his accomplishments? Elaborate on your opinion on whether you agree or disagree with an example of a successful person you know.

Some people think that the place where a person is brought up influences his accomplishments. I disagree with that idea because there are numerous successful celebrities today that did not have the best childhood. For example, Dwayne Johnson was brought up in the slums by a single mother but still turned out to be one of the most successful and influential person today.

Success depends on hard work and efforts, not where you were brought up. It was evident in Dwayne’s childhood as he only lived day to day with minimal money. He did not have the privilege to attend good schools, but his hard work and determination has managed to get him a career in wrestling. That was only a start to his successful career.

Apart from that, perseverance was also another value he emphasized on. The ability to always pick yourself up when you fall will help you face numerous challenges. This means that, although you face more hardship than other people, you should not give up and continue to pursue your dreams. In Dwayne’s situation, it was clear that the place where he was brought up was not optimal to be successful, yet he managed to get to where he is today by perseverance.

In conclusion, it is evident that the place where you were brought up does not affect your accomplishments. In Dwayne Johnson’s case, it was his hard work and perseverance that managed to help him to get where he is today.